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一篇好文章的条件很多。除了内容丰富和组织紧密之外,词汇的运用和句子的处理,也起着决定性作用。 (来源:英语麦当劳-英语杂志 www.EnglishCN.com)
句子可长可短,同一件事,可以用不同的句式表达。如果句子清一色是简单句,文章必定很单调乏味。如果全篇充满了冗长的复杂句,读起来也很费力。最好的方法是以简单句为基础,配合 (来源:英语分类信息 http://fl.englishcn.com)
适当的并列句和复杂句。简单句可长可短,通常要加些附属成分,如分词短语、介词短语、副词短语、不定式动词短语,以及节缩成分。 (来源:英语分类信息 http://fl.englishcn.com)
总之,作者可根据情况,使句子多样化,使文章灵活多姿。例如下列五个句子的基本概念一样,但是句式不同,内容重点也有些差别: (来源:英语图片 http://photo.englishcn.com)
(1) The goats grazed peacefully in the farm and were unaware of the approaching hunter. (并列分句(1)+2) (来源:EnglishCN英语博客基地)
(2) Grazing peacefully, the goats in the farm were unaware of the approaching hunter. (现在分语短语+简单句) (来源:英语分类信息 http://fl.englishcn.com)
(3) In the farm, the goats grazed peacefully and were unaware of the approaching hunter. (副词短语+并列分句(1)-(2) ) (来源:英语麦当劳-英语杂志 EnglishCN.com)
(4) There were goats grazing peacefully in the farm, unaware of the approaching hunter. (简单句+形容语短语) (来源:英语麦当劳 http://www.EnglishCN.com)
(5) As the goats grazed peacefully in the farm, they were unaware of the approaching hunter. (原因副词从句+主句) (来源:英语问答中心 http://ask.englishcn.com)
(1)和(5)的句式最常见;如果加上其他三种互相交替,句子不是更多样化吗? (来源:英语麦当劳-英语快餐EnglishCN.com)
最后,看看这两个句子要如何多样化呢? (来源:英语麦当劳-英语杂志 www.EnglishCN.com)
(6) The young pilot was on his first overseas training. (来源:英语麦当劳-英语杂志 www.EnglishCN.com)
(7) He felt very uneasy. (来源:英语麦当劳-英语杂志 www.EnglishCN.com)
(a) The young pilot on his first overseas training felt very uneasy. (来源:英语论坛 http://bbs.englishcn.com)
(b) The young pilot felt very uneasy during his first overseas training. (来源:英语麦当劳-英语杂志 www.EnglishCN.com)
(c) The young pilot''''''''s first overseas training made him feel very uneasy. (来源:英语麦当劳-英语快餐EnglishCN.com)
(d) Extreme uneasiness seized the young pilot on his first overseas training. (来源:英语分类信息 http://fl.englishcn.com)
(e) The young pilot was on his first overseas training, feeling very uneasy. (来源:英语美食指南 http://food.englishcn.com)
(f) It being his first overseas training, the young pilot felt very uneasy. (来源:英语分类信息 http://fl.englishcn.com)
(g) Being on his first overseas training, the young pilot felt very uneasy. (来源:英语e问e答 http://ask.englishcn.com)
(h) The young pilot was on his first overseas training and felt very uneasy. (来源:英语问答中心 http://ask.englishcn.com)
(i) The young pilot, who was on his first overseas training, felt very uneasy. (来源:专业英语学习网站 http://www.EnglishCN.com)
(j) When the young pilot was on his/first overseas trainging, he felt very uneasy. (来源:英语美食指南 http://food.englishcn.com)
(k) As the young pilot was on his first overseas training, he felt very uneasy. (来源:英语问答中心 http://ask.englishcn.com)
(l) The young pilot was on his first overseas training, so that he felt very uneasy. (来源:英语论坛 http://bbs.englishcn.com)
在上述12个句子中,(a)-(g)是简单句;(h)是并列句;(i)-(l)是复杂句。简单句除(b)和(g)之外,其他五样,用的人并不多。人们最喜欢采用复杂句,尤其是(j)和(k)这两款;接着便是并列句(h)。如果大多数人的句子只限于(b),(g), (h), (j)和(k)这五种,而其他的则弃如敝屣,不是很可惜吗? (来源:英语麦当劳 http://www.EnglishCN.com)
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